Based on our Class reader The Minpins by Roald Dahl
Little Billys Scary Ride
I am holding onto the swans feathers very tight, I am trying to get to the lake but I can only
just see it in the distance. I have got this huge Gruncher,the growling monster chasing me!
We reach the sparkling lake and when I look behind me I see the enormous gruncher
sizzling in the deep blue lake. I See Don Mini on a sparrow nearby and all the other Minpins. They are all yelling hooray for Billy! Now the Minpins and I can walk on the forest floor again.
By Connor
Awesome writing Connor :)
ReplyDeleteI like the writing connor of the minpin story.kaitlyns mum kylie
ReplyDeleteGreat story Connor. Tregidga Family
ReplyDeleteCool story
ReplyDeleteWill done Connor. By Shakayla
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