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Tuesday 15 April 2014

Noah By Rhiannon


Noah


Noah has long skinny wobbly arms.He has long skinny old leg’s.One sunny fine blue day he complained so much that his round complaining old head fell off his old panicking head. His ridiculous Mum rushed him to the funny white old hospital but they said nothing could be done to his round complaining old head so his sad old wrinkly Mum went home with a sad sad sad face. He smelt like a old disgusting little rat that sits around in the old watery disgusting suer.He sounds like a old grey damp elephant. I feel sad that his round complaining old head fell off but he sure did complain a lot and I mean a lot!


By Rhiannon     

2 comments:

  1. What great description Rhiannon. From Room 10

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  2. Welcome back to school room 7....... Hope everyone had a Happy Holiday..... The weather wasn't the best for you....Seems Australia's Cyclone Ita came visiting New Zealand... Spoke to Isaac & was pleased to hear they were ok....
    Love the stories about Noah. Keep up the good work... Tell next time... Regards .. Isacc's Nanna. (Aleyne Woolf)

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