Volcano
I can see lava spitting out of the top of the volcano. I can see stinky smelly smoke floating over hot burning pools of lava. I can see hot burning bits of wood in big deep craters. I can see rising smoke above a big pile of ash. I can see the black, dark, scary, dangerous, rumbling sky. I can see red hot burning lava going around broken trees. I can see a new land coming to the town. I can see dangerous dark clouds. I can see shaking, rumbling houses. I can smell hot burning, smokey air and I can feel burning rocks under my cold feet. I can see burning dying flowers and burning hot steaming smoke. I can hear rumbling, tumbling and booming scary noises. I can smell dirty black smoke. I can feel the smoky air going across my face. I can feel the burning hot air going all around my hot little body. I can feel the brown hot burning volcano burning my little cold feet. I can feel the vibrating ground. I feel scared and sad and brave and frightened all at the same time! I feel a burning hot scary breeze sneaking up behind me!!! I can see a new world coming soon. I can taste disgusting, yucky, dark, clouds trying to get into my mouth. I can taste yucky air trying to make my mouth dry up...... I can smell fresh air now because the volcano has stopped erupting and I can see a new land now.
By Nevaeh.
Hi Nevaeh.
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